Day: June 5, 2015

Why LNS is Unique: By Louis and Joe

June 5, 2015 / / 1 Comment

We are the LNS.
Parade is navy style and Titanic helped the school open so it can put kids at sea.
Success is always at LNS because they are the best.
Unique uniform if you see!
Even when we’re out at sea!
If you see,
If you see,
Kids at sea,
kids at sea.
24/7 if you see!
Sports college,
Sports college.
Our football team is mean and gleen.
3 finals one won!
We’re always number one.
Now where finished and done!!

This poem is really good and shows how unique the school is.The content is good and your view needs to be stated. Comment by ARB

Why this school stood out to me! by Ali.Q & Frankie.T

June 5, 2015 / / 4 Comments

There is a school called LNS,

Unique as unique could be.

It has sailing and kayaking,

Watches as form,

Berets, Parade and navy.

It has rewards, heritage and blue wooly jumpers,

white shirts and black ties.

Our uniform is dandy indeed,

We have skills and we have rhythm.

Full of heroism,

This school can’t get better you see.

We’ve been through terror,

We’ve been through whatever,

Thats why this school stood out to me!

BY : ALI.Q AND FRANKIE.T

 

 

 

 

 

This post is very good and I like that it is a poem and that it is your opinion.The content is very effective.Next time you should not space your poem as much. Comment by ARB