We are the LNS.
Parade is navy style and Titanic helped the school open so it can put kids at sea.
Success is always at LNS because they are the best.
Unique uniform if you see!
Even when we’re out at sea!
If you see,
If you see,
Kids at sea,
kids at sea.
24/7 if you see!
Sports college,
Sports college.
Our football team is mean and gleen.
3 finals one won!
We’re always number one.
Now where finished and done!!
This poem is really good and shows how unique the school is.The content is good and your view needs to be stated. Comment by ARB
June 19, 2015 at 1:00 pm
I enjoy the type of words used in this poem. It’s very detailed and all of the facts are true such as “3 finals one won!”. It would be better if you didn’t use as much repetition. Maybe the use of personification and alliteration would be good as well. Overall this is a good piece of work.