Our school is one of the best schools in London as it has achieved many rewards in sports.
Under 13s have made it to 3 finals and lost twice. This makes us one of the best football teams in London and could even be one of the best teams in England! Although we got knocked out of the National Cup, which is all the teams in England, we got to the last 32 teams in England.
We are also one of the smartest schools as we have also achieved many rewards to do with or work and also got good report from ofsted.
June 4, 2015 at 1:06 pm
This is a good piece of work. I’ve tweeked it a bit as it did not flow very well, perhaps you can notice where the changes have been made. Please read through your work at the end or as you write and make those adjustments, such as varying the length your sentences and adding more punctuation!!!!! Please ALWAYS include your name on your work as I’m not aware of whose work I am writing about. Thank you Miss Citro