This year in splash I would say has been extremely successful we have done many things this includes making a website and cooperating with the BBC in certain ways. As this was my first year in splash, along with many others who have recently joint the splash team, I do not know how well they past years have been in this team but I am pretty certain that this year has been won of the best for the splash team. As well as all of these things which have been happening in splash there is another thing which I think is one of the most important things this year is the 100 year anniversary of our school London Nautical which is quite a big thing to us as this school was put up due to the titanic disaster to stop things like that happening again and i personally believe that that has gave us a lot of things to wright about in the splash team.
Next year I am looking forward to making more progress within the team and reporting more news fore you to check out on our website and now I would like to say thank you to all of the members of the splash team for helping to make grate progress in the team this year.
June 11, 2015 at 9:32 am
Very good work Tobias! You’ve done Amazing work and I can tell that you have put alot of effort in this and you have put in a great amount of detail in this piece.I enjoyed all the content of your work but you might need to change your style as it is a bit too basic! Next time you should double-check your Spelling before you publish it!
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June 11, 2015 at 9:35 am
Wow! I like the way when you make progress in Splash. One thing you need to improve is you have to put capital letter for ‘I’.
June 11, 2015 at 9:36 am
I think this is a very good post Tobias. all the work you have put is showing. Now but maybe you could go in to more detail and to watch your spelling such as the word write. Also I quite like the professional style that you have as it comes off as a very effective content with the perfect balance between imagery and written content. I think everyone in splash and any other lesson knows and understand the viewpoint your trying to get across.
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